I think your time sequence works well because it skips enough time for the viewer to fill in the blanks logically, and it contains a somewhat unpredictable element with the injury to the skater. It's also well known so you have that for appeal to a wide audience. Well-executed for the most part.
Nice, very good story of how perseverance is rewarding. Almost inspiring.
ReplyDeletegood story but you're actually telling someone else's story so i dont know if its actually original. but still good
ReplyDeleteThat looks like a deep cut. Good job there Brandon
ReplyDeleteInspiring! Follows the structure very well.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good story, and easy to follow. Although it would have been cool if you had made up your own story..
ReplyDeleteNice story i remember hearing this story on tv during the olympics.
ReplyDeleteI think your time sequence works well because it skips enough time for the viewer to fill in the blanks logically, and it contains a somewhat unpredictable element with the injury to the skater. It's also well known so you have that for appeal to a wide audience. Well-executed for the most part.
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